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Only Human
(#) InuKag 2006-10-08
make them a bit longer still. You will have better review outcome if people are able to get more of an idea as to what you are trying to do.Author's response
thanks for the review and the advice. and actually, the chapters do start to get longer, i have a few more done already...Only Human
(#) inuyashalover2011 2006-11-11
great story but right the chapters alot longer when u get the chance ok well great story and bye talk later keep writing.Author's response
thanks for your review. and the chapters do get longer, though they aren't all posted here yet.
if you'd like to read the latest updates to my stories, i always post them at fanfiction.net under the same username first....Only Human
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-04
Good story. You were right it was longer. By about 200 words :). There was one point where you said 'I'd wouldn't' It should be 'I wouldn't'. Other than that there could've been a bit more description to add a little zip. For instance when he heard something in the bushed maybe his ear twitched.
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