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Everyone has secrets. Toph has a few more than most people.
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A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) HakuRules1424 2006-10-13
That was really good, togh (i think i spelled that wrong) is my second favorite charactor i watch the show all the time my first it Kitara Water benders rule!!!! anyway write more CyaA Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) limmy147 2006-11-28
This is a very good and interesting story. Please finish it!!!Author's response
It is finished. It only has one part. It is what is called a one-shot. Note the little thing under the description that reads 'Completed: Yes'. There is no more. There will never be any more. There was never any intention to WRITE any more. What gave you the impression there was going to be more? The story concludes. It finishes. There are no unresolved plot threads. Where did you get the idea there was going to be more?
Next time think before pressing the 'submit review' button.A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) limmy147 2006-12-02
First of to your response, I did indeed liked you story, but if you want to be an bitch about not my problem. I thought that you story wasn't very whole and Toph is a blind girl, but you saw that she saw her father take pleasure in her mother and other what not, if you are blind that is impossibal.A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) limmy147 2006-12-02
First of to your response, I did indeed liked you story, but if you want to be an bitch about not my problem. I thought that you story wasn't very whole and Toph is a blind girl, but you saw that she saw her father take pleasure in her mother and other what not, if you are blind that is impossibal.Author's response
Have you watched the show at all? Did you, in fact, read this fic? She saw the way she sees everything; vibrations through the ground.A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) limmy147 2006-12-03
Yes, she does see with the vibration of the ground, but to sombody who has not watched the show, that would be hard to understand. you cant asume that everybody who reads your fan fiction has watched the show.Author's response
...even ignoring that it would have been plenty clear, the target audience of fanfiction is. Well. FANS.A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) limmy147 2006-12-03
Forgot to ask about this part, "fed up at last of hearing her, drew back a hand and struck her mother sharply about the face" and you also say that she can't hear what they are saying, so how can she hear a slap?Author's response
...way to fail hard at reading comprehension. She didn't hear anything. Her father heard her mother, and slapped her. Nowhere in there does this equate to Toph hearing things.A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) limmy147 2006-12-04
O.k whatever you say. I will say nothing more expect Happy Holiday.A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) Sharpay 2007-07-06
i like your story, its fantastic- i think you'll make a great author one day.A Blind Girl's Secrets
(#) stupid-little-lamb 2008-04-20
wow.. thats.. wow..
seriously, this is cool.
to the person up there: you suck. end of story. even my eight year old nephew would understand this story. dimwad.
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