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(#) Bitter-Irony 2007-01-11Very nice poem--I especially like the little twist at the end.
A little nit-picky bit: the use of the word "sundry" was rather unexpected and it feels old-fashioned and out of place.
My favorite couplet was the third-to-last, because those are very much the things I miss most after a relationship.
Good job, keep up the good work!
Author's responseThank you. Regarding "sundry," I know it's old-fashioned, but I like the word. :) It's so classy.
(#) me_myself_and_MCR 2007-02-26Aww, this was cute! Thank you for leaving a comment on my story! Yea i was mad that day because my ex was trying to get back with me and then he was spreading romors(Sp?) And so i told him off and so i am sorry that my respond sounded a little rude!! I am really really sorry but i love this poem!!!:):):):):):). Keep going!
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