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Julius stood at the podium and started out at the faces of everyone he had grown up with there were tears in their eyes and smiles on their faces. He began to speak. "Sometimes we lose people. W...
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An Old Memory
(#) darks00 2006-10-15
Ok I know I beta-read this story, but I didn't give you a proper review. I would rate, but I don't have any points left, LOL. I thought it was very good, and I hope you make more stories :) Very nice and original
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(#) Trinda 2006-10-15
You silly people! DELILAH'S wearing the weding band, not his old girlfriend. And Julius is giving like a speach at his weding or engagement party or something. Am I right princess?
Anyways. Love the story though. I just wished that you would of done more on after they met up again.Author's response
Yes your right, and he is giving the speech at his wedding...note wedding band. lol. sorry to everyone if it was kinda confusing. I wrote it in like half an hour, and Darks can back me up on that.An Old Memory
(#) darks00 2006-10-17
I agree with Trinda. I thought it made sense, Princess. And yes, Princess, I can back you up, LOL.
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(#) crispycrunch 2008-01-29
that was soo cute.. i did not see that coming!! :D its so gud.. great jobed.. loveed it ! XD
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