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My Sanctuary
(#) panda_1418 2006-10-19
Oh nooooooo!!! Stupid Kenny, what a dork! And then Kyle crashed into the drum set. Will they make it to the next round????????????????? ARGH, THE SUSPENCE!!!!Author's response
LOL yep that's Kennys personality- the dork of the group. Yep, Kyle crashed poor Joeys drum set. Next round, are they going make it? You're going to see two chapters later. Thanks for reviewing!
xxDarkness' KidxxMy Sanctuary
(#) Trinda 2006-10-20
Awwie. Poor Joey's drum set, though they did make one heck of an entrance, I'd vote for them ;)
Loved the chapter, it seemed well thought of and planned. Excellant.Author's response
Yeah. I feel even more sorry for Joeys drum. LOL jj. Thanks, I apprecite. Actually, it took me about ten minutes to plan and thought...lol. Thanks for reviewing!
xxDarkness' KidxxMy Sanctuary
(#) fruit_addict 2007-10-15
haha noice. a few mistakes but ya know that's almost expected ;) good writing :)
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