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Teammate Down
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-10-21
Poor Neil, he does something to help someone other than himself and he gets hurt, please update as soon as you can!Teammate Down
(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-21
aww, I feel bad for Neil now, he got hurt! And when he saved Jay too! Hope it all works out for him in the end!:D Update soon!Teammate Down
(#) greektitan 2006-10-22
Aww,poor blond neil,he got hurt,and he fianally did something for someone other then him,i cryed a couple tears.please update soon.(Sniff)!Teammate Down
(#) greektitan 2006-10-22
oh yea...
Neil groans and closes his eyes. Jay and Odie exchanges quick, worried looks. Hang on, Neil! The young leader thought anxiously, please just hold on. We can't lose you, not now...
was my faveorite part!Author's response
You will have to thank my beta reader for that last bit. She is both a good friend, and a creative person. That line was her idea :)
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