Reviews for By The Light Of Our Love: Chapter Two :: FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

Categories > Original > Fantasy > By The Light Of Our Love

Chapter Two

by princessofoyownworld 1 review

Belle argues with Capi over how long it will take to get to Camlet. She prays that she is right. Better than my summary. I suck at summarys.

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance - Published: 2006-10-24 - Updated: 2006-10-24 - 722 words

0Unrated

Reviews

By The Light Of Our Love

(#) fruit_addict 2007-05-24

nice! although one thing doesn't fit. the way her sword was positioned made no sense. the handle being at the bottom, well the sword would fall out and it wouldn't make it very easy to pull out of it's seath. If she was attacked it would delay her long enough to be killed. Just a little detail... finish more plz!

Sign up to review this story.