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• Re-Ordered

  (#) Dragen 2006-10-25

  What a great second chapter, so Dobby and Winky are now Harry's... I couldn't believe that Ginny and Mrs. Weasley would use potions to get to Harry... but yeah, your story.
  
  Sirius' letter congratulated Harry on doing at 15 what he himself had done at 16, ie tossing over the traces and running away. That was funny.
  
  Keep up the great work and update soon.

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  (#) Alatoic01 2006-10-25

  Excelent chapter, I really like how you explained things. Also that Dumbledore is not evil, just trying to to good things with the wrong information, I suppose that can happen when you try to control everything.
  
  I know Hermione will learn oculmency really soon, after all she have an organizated mind, lets see what else training can she do with Harry, besides its seem that their relationship is going well.
  
  Hope to read next chapter soon.
  
  Cheers
  
  MAC

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  (#) captuniv 2006-10-25

  I like the start to this one. I can see that Dumbles is really going to be pissing off a few people with his machinations to reel in Harry. Plus, with the efforts of Mrs. Weasley and Ginny, Harry is not going to settle for interference. Hopefully, Harry will be able to get in touch with Sirius and Remus personally at some point and confide in them. They should be great help. Can't wait to see what the fallout of the Trial has been in the press.

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  (#) HeWhoComesWithTheDaw 2006-10-25

  Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

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  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-10-25

  I do hope Harry stripped... Great chapter. I look forward to more.

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  (#) wolfe3 2006-10-25

  exciting

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  (#) snowman 2006-10-25

  Great work.

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  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-10-26

  Great update. The contrasts between this and Triwizard Redux alone are enough to keep me occupied. I especially like the minor characters' involvement thus far.

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  (#) brad 2006-10-26

  Ah, that EVIL Ginny! And/or Mrs. Weasley!
  
  Nice little bit of cuteness with Hermione in her pyjamas. The point that she'd been veered off Harry by his tantrums in their 5th year was well made.
  
  I don't know why Harry is in such a rush to tell Hermione everything, when she is months away from being able to protect those secrets from legilimency?
  
  I'm looking forward to what Harry's going to do when he comes across one of the 'anathema' folk, although he's so over-powered there may be little drama in it?

  Author's response

  Harry is sure she will be able to protect her mind from passive legilimency by the start of school. She'll also be able to recognize active legilimency by then as well, but Dumbledore isn't likely to use that one her. As for Snape, Harry is working on a plan for Snape, even if it will appear to be spontaneous to fool Dumbledore.
  
  "T"

• Re-Ordered

  (#) DarkeGray 2006-10-26

  So far I like this story but I will hold off on giving my true judgement until I read more. It is a little different than the usual 'Harry gets sent back in time stories' mainly because of the whole 2 Harrys merging and whatnot. I hope to see more soon.
  
  DG

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