Ready for another twist?
You might want to pay attention to a lot of things that are said in this chapter. There are TONS of referances to it later in the story, and there is TONS of foreshadowing...
If I promise to put out chpt 17 of Situation Hopeless tonight, can I get another chapter out of you? I'm a dirty briber.
Oh my god.
You make me sad.
I'm sorry Patrick!!!
I feel like a biatch now.
Please tell me I get nicer later in the story?
Or I kill you.
holy crap poor patrick! i feel sorry for him! and what about ur dad? please update soon
uh oh. uh ohhhhh. this is not good. not good at all. kevin's an ass. he better be lucky i wasnt there or patrick wouldn't have gotten a cut on him and kevin would have ended up in a hospital. grrr how can anyone even think of beating up poor, sweet, innocent, shy patrick?! ah sorry he's a cutie and doesn't deserve that. i am now mad. and kinda surprised that the dad has called. uh oh
Daddy Wenz is still alive?
This is like an episode of Degrassi.
Chyeah...it goes there.
Ohhh Drama Drama!
And poor Patrick! This kid can't get a break.
ASHLEY'S REVIEW HAHAAHHAHAHAHAHA
aw patty-boy, this makes me want to hug him. oh yea and, HOSHIT THIS WAS GREAT.
anyway, that was just great though. the whole city morgue thing. lawlz. yea. this was so good, all coherant thought was lost.
Hm, bruised and battered Patrick seems to spread on ficwad too. Ah well... I´m not feeling guilty. (I´m a lousy liar.) Interesting chappie, lots of shit going on there.
Dad?! Now I'm confused. Please unconfuse me. UPDATE SOON!
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