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Steel

by Macey_Muse 2 reviews

When all the world is fading into steel... (A modern sonnet, in the Shakesperian rhyme-scheme)

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Published: 2006-10-26 - Updated: 2006-10-26 - 105 words - Complete

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Steel

(#) darks00 2006-10-26

Ok sorry but I have to give a short review for I'm at school... ;)

Very nice. I could really see it. Very, very, good! (rates insightful)

xxDarkness' Kidxx
Steel

(#) Bitter-Irony 2006-10-26

Great poem! The theme is all too true...and of course, it's also great to see a true sonnet every once in a while! I've never quite managed the "iambic pentameter" part of the equation...sigh. Okay, enough of my angst. Give yourself a pat on the back for restoring one reader's hope for poetry!

Keep up the good work!

~Bitter Irony

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