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Dancers, Slytherins, and Elves
18 reviewsWhen would be the best point in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? Right before the First Task! In this chapter, the Christmas Break starts.
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Triwizard Redux
(#) matthiasblack 2006-10-31
Hooray, another chapter for the good doctor. Keep up the good work.Triwizard Redux
(#) Dragen 2006-10-31
What a great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next so Dobby and Winky and now Harry and Hermione's... I love the idea. I wished that you done the sex scean better.Author's response
This fic is border-line R (more becasue of some violence and bad language than sex). Wait for Re-Ordered for the sex scenes.
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(#) brad 2006-11-01
"denying that Neville was having anywhere near as good a time holding Ginny" - heh. Ditto the charms on Ginny's feet!
I enjoyed the paragraph describing Luna's 'blossoming'. Nice.
So they're now showering together - as in being naked together? Was the jump to this level of intimacy in this chapter, in the big bed, or did I miss things?
I thought the house-elf thing was a bit of a large segue off the track of the chapter.Author's response
Yes, they were 'intimate' (ie the reason behind Hermione's parseltongue remark), but it was off-camera.
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(#) pi3142 2006-11-01
Fan of your work for ages - good update speed, and good to see you willing to work over and over with your themes and storylines to get the best mix.
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