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Treasured Years
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-03
I´m psyched to find out where this is going. Just a tip: Maybe you can try to work on your layout a bit. That would make it easier to read. :) Thanks.Author's response
Thank- you so much for the review and support. Thanks for the tip I'm sure it will be helpful in my writing now.if you have any ideas for this story please tell me.Thank-you againTreasured Years
(#) sing4me09 2006-11-03
good...A little suggestion...if I may...Try putting in spaces to cut up the chapter. Not only does it make it easier to read, but since your chapters are shorter it makes them seem longer...I really like it please write more for us soonAuthor's response
Hey thank you very much for the review.and for the advice..I will defintly start doing that now thanks.and if you have any ideas for the next chapter please tell me.Thanks againTreasured Years
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-11-03
OK, I really like this story, but it's just a tad hard to read all smashed together. Update soon!Treasured Years
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-03
maybe a little bit of work on the format to make it easier to read. if you have any questions on how to do that, or if you just need some guidance feel free to either contact me through this fantabulous ficwad or I.M. me.
it took me a while to catch on too. damn HTML format.
Anyway, you should write for yourself. it really doesn't matter what people review on here or rate, as long as you (as a writer) are satisfied.
like i said, if you need any help, feel free to drop me a line. and keep the updates coming. i'm interested to see where this story is going...
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