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• Answer to the Question/Drabble Piece

  (#) dkg 2006-11-08

  Very insightful :P

  Author's response

  Thanks!

• Answer to the Question/Drabble Piece

  (#) Rous 2006-11-10

  This is a very nice piece. The imagery is wonderful. Just a couple of things: a period after "...in the early dawn..." would close that thought, before jumping into the next one. Also, "...silence is filled around..." is very awkward. I am not exactly sure what you want to say here.
  
  Lastly, a drabble should be 100 words, not counting the title. What you have is great, just not a drabble.
  
  One reference for this is:
  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Drabble
  It will give you some information on the genre.
  
  Again, a very nice poem. I am off to check out some more.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the comment and suggestions!

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