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Patrick has word vomit.
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This Bitter Pill
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2006-11-07
corbin's so naughty. who knew pregnant ladies were so insatiable? poor petey...This Bitter Pill
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2006-11-07
corbin's so naughty. who knew pregnant ladies were so insatiable? poor petey...This Bitter Pill
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-08
I love the way you can describe what each character is feeling with so much depth, and all in one chapter!
that's an amazing chapter. corbin is completley confused, pete is clueless, and patrick seems to be the most intuative.
i love this story...This Bitter Pill
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-08
I've been waiting forever for this update - THANK YOU, it was totally worth the wait.
Corbin is falling for Patrick - whod'a thought huh? I can see why, you wrote him into this well and it's making me swoon. Seriously, if you ever need an ego trip - let me know - I'll do it for free and I'll eat popcorn while I do it.
xxx
Total respect.Author's response
wonderful. my ego is tripping and it loves it you for it ;)
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