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• Best Thing that You Never Had

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-09

  YIPPY SKIPPY! UPDATE... Ok, I need to read it first maybe... ;) Be right back with comments.

• Best Thing that You Never Had

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-09

  You know I dig "Big Dreams..." but seriously, girl, you´ve really improved. That´s a kick-ass chapter. The "Hey Chris!" comment on the phone made me chuckle. Yes, it is a classic. You´ve got some great conversation going on here, paired with cute Patrick moments and the Andy-starts-a-new-life... ah, mission. I´m loving it. You´re getting my next to last rating point. :)

  Author's response

  thanks! yeah... big dreams was my first and i got really lazy when i was writing it. i'm trying to get better! i might update on that one sometime in the future, but who knows! thanks for the review, like always!

• Best Thing that You Never Had

  (#) imogen993 2006-11-09

  I actually love this story. Like, If it was possible to marry a story, I would marry this one. =] Like yeah. The 'Hey chris' this was a good bit. Liked it. x] And the previous chapters with Evie made me laugh so much. Even though the amount of times that you mentioned her being hot made the narrator sound like a lesbian. Lmao. I love this story. =] - - Izzy

  Author's response

  not a lesbian... more like a smart ass. annd i'm really glad you love this story and of course it will marry you (if it could)!

• Best Thing that You Never Had

  (#) moocow 2006-11-09

  hey.
  
  i am not a whore.

  Author's response

  no no i know! amy is just a little jealous.

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