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• All Alone

  (#) panda_1418 2006-11-09

  Darn, I thought Kevin was so nice, but he IS a creep! What a dork. Too bad Julius isn't around anymore, or he could protect her. ='[

• All Alone

  (#) darks00 2006-11-09

  "It was amazing, but since she had entered the café, no tears had dropped from either of her eyes. Not even when she talked about Julius and his death. Maybe it was because she had cried herself out or maybe it was because she just didn't care anymore."
  
  No offence, but that paragraph is really out of character. First she cares about him, crying her eyes out, then she doesn't care anymore? I'm confused to be honest. I don't think Delilah would just "not care" about Julius anymore.
  
  Besides that, great chapter. Hmmm wonder what the Kevin guys up to...plz update soon!
  
  xxDarkness' Kidxx

  Author's response

  No! When I said that “maybe it was because she just didn't care anymore.” I meant that maybe she didn’t care about life anymore. You know sometimes when you feel down, you just don’t care what happens to you.
  I never meant that she didn’t care about Julius anymore. That would be crazy not to mention impossible!
  Sorry for the confusion.

• All Alone

  (#) Trinda 2006-11-09

  Kevin's alittle... too eager. I dunno but he seems to be going out of his way for Delilah, that's gotta be a good thing... maybe. Can't wait to what the new day brings for Delilah.

• All Alone

  (#) vaiwandil 2006-11-11

  wonderful! I hope you'll update soon, it's great stuff!
  btw. that andi is a very interesting character, congrats!

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