(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-11Kwan's a genius.
I like the complexities of Harry's relationship with Karina, even if it'll probably end up a trainwreck. It's just plain interesting to hear about. We'll have to see what part Paulo plays in the future; he seems important.
The fight was also quite good, as was the idea for allowing a goblin to cast spells. Very unique. But then again, so is this entire story.
Can't wait for more.
Author's responseKwan's just frightening, even to write. The trainwreck is coming. All the pieces are nearly in place.
Thanks for the review. I am still looking forward to more chapters of your stories. Hope to see some soon!~Jim
- Kwan is quite the motivator it seems, Crucios for aparation, dirty underwear gags for soundless casting, what's next, dragons for flight training?...wait.
You know, I'm highly amused it's taken me this long to realize you had ANOTHER story of yours to read.
I have to admit, at first, the first person POV threw me off, but now I enjoy the wonderfull look into Harry's mind. Much deeper than we see in any of the books, or in any other fanfic it seems.
I can honestly say, I'm hooked, and I'm eagerly awaiting another update.
Author's responseWhy thank you! I appreciate the recognition for going so deeply into Harry's mind. Chapter 15 is coming in 2 weeks.~Jim
- I don't know how many times I said this but I am absolutely in love with your story, it's just so perfect even down to the smallest of things. I just have to ask how much time do you have to think to come up with something like 'the magic bullet', the magical band or the sock technique?
Author's responseGah! I am even further behind on replies for this one. My wife would argue that I have far too much time on my hand.~Jim
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