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Love will tear us apart
(#) Rous 2006-11-21
Um, I am going out on a limb here, but this needs some serious betaing. The premise sounds promising, but without some hard work, you will not find many to read past the first few lines.Author's response
o.0 oh ok i'l have anutha look over it, and thanx
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