"I'll be right down." I pointed a stern finger down at him. "Hold on."
i rly like this !!
its soo diferent n so un-cliche
dnt have an ideas thou sorri look frwd to the nxt chapter thou =)
I love this story, please keep writing!!!^_^
Thanks! I will do my bestest to keep you coming back for more.
awww how cute!
i like this story!
Whew! I'm glad it was cute and not cheesy. Don't want to step over that boundary, you know. Glad you enjoyed it!
(#) emrod 2006-11-15
Hot!!! does not quite explain it... love it! keep going chica!
Thank ya Em! I'm glad you finally got on this site with me. But now I get to heckle you even more about your stories! Mwahaha. Love you!
Wow-ie, this story's aweesome! Haha i love the part when bren shows up at her house it made me giggle lol yeah anyway Keep Up The Aweesome writing !
I actually have a new chap. coming. I'm kinda nervous about it tho...
That was great. That really seemed like something that I might so to someone. Just call and say: "Hey, I'm looking at your house." So yeah. It was awesome. Good chapter.
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