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Kill the Magical World
(#) KEmperor 2006-11-16
It's not a bad plot, but it could use some more beta work. There are several glaring mistakes, like calling Ronald Weasley "Roland Weasley" several times.Author's response
Fixed. Thanks for the review.Kill the Magical World
(#) Lord_Phoenyx 2006-11-16
Good story would love to read more. Plz keep the updates coming.
Update soon.Kill the Magical World
(#) selenepotter 2006-11-17
This is a great fic!
I can't wait to read the next chapter!Kill the Magical World
(#) DavidMPotter 2006-11-20
Another fantastic chapter. I look forward to seeing Harry and Ginny relationship bloom. I also hope they add Luna and it becomes a threesome.Kill the Magical World
(#) Cimmerian 2026-07-01
I know the story explicitly says "Gray Harry" but then you go and (1) have him use an Unforgiveable... twice... including an order for his uncle to rape his aunt. (2) set up deadly traps around a public area that caused the destruction of multiple businesses and assaulted police/aurors.
... this isn't "Grey" this is "Dark". And, after destroying her brother's business, I hardly think that Ginny Weasley (who cannonically was dating Dean at the time) is about to beg Harry to take her away; he is acting like a complete psycho. ... and, honestly, Ginny isn't developed as anything other than a "fangirl" and is totally uninteresting when compared to at least a half-dozen more developed & interesting possible romantic interests his age (Susan, Patils, Lavender, Luna, Katie, Hermione...) who AREN'T related to Howler Harradan Molly or Jealous Fickle Garbage Gut Ron (no issues re. the remainder of the Weasleys).
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