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The power of the elemental
(#) slasheh 2006-11-17
nice lemon, but i must admit the plot is fairly contrived so far...
it simply isn't easy to imagine the rapid changes you included so far.
though i still hope you continue the story, since at least it is original (and i cant wait for some of the reactions to the "healing" :D)Author's response
The healing I am going to write now.The power of the elemental
(#) DarkeGray 2006-11-17
Ok, the idea of the story is pretty good. I think it is moving along pretty fast though. Also the grammer of the story makes it hard to read, for me at least. Also with the last chapter, this story is no longer a PG-13 story. I think you need to up it to at least an R rating if not a NC-17.Author's response
I did not rate this tory very well. You were riht of cause. I corrected the rating.The power of the elemental
(#) Dragen 2006-11-18
What a hot chapter, I wonder how people are going to react, and are they going to start a hearm or not, lets hope they do. Keep up the great work and please update reall soon.The power of the elemental
(#) ubersnakelord 2006-11-25
Nice story, good lemon, bit i think dumbledore should not have found things so fast, and he should take a trip to Diagon Alley, knockturn ally and i don´t know, use his elements to reed all the books in the shops, get a new wand, get emancipated and a few other things.
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