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Love in Unexpected Places
(#) xkashi_queenx 2007-01-16
Good job again! thought it was Fleur Delacour, that girl :-)
For some constructive critism: good job on the story and everything, but I think you may have rushed the pairings a little bit. You also might wanna explore the story outside of the romance, like what happens in classes in stuff, will outside interference break the pairs up, will someone not like someone anymore...stuff like that.
Otherwise, I love the story! keep up the good work, because you're doing pretty good now.Author's response
Thank you very much! I will see what I can do, I will start that as sson as the seventh chapter is out, seeing that I have already written it. 8-)
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