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• Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

  (#) Nautilus 2006-11-26

  this is good so far, its still early days yet, but i the story has good outlook.
  
  i look forward to how Harry is considered by all, especially what will happen now that he is the head of the Black family. what about DARK MAGIC.
  
  so when was Lupin and Tonks relationship established, especially since Roselin is 16.
  
  i guess Rose is Alex's teritory. that should be fun...
  
  anyway congrats and update soon.

• Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

  (#) Fuzzball 2006-11-26

  You might want to review your story for some minor errors such as tenses. This is a good start though. For example in your last chapter about Rosaline. You have her being in the womb and at the same time being born all in the same paragraph.

• Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

  (#) JVTazz 2006-11-27

  original story looking forward to the next chapter :)

• Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

  (#) Kitryuu 2006-11-27

  question how is "Tonks was currently seven month pregnant with Rosaline Athena Lupin." "Rosaline currently dating Alex Potter at sixteen" possible

• Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

  (#) Kitryuu 2006-11-27

  question how is "Tonks was currently seven month pregnant with Rosaline Athena Lupin." "Rosaline currently dating Alex Potter at sixteen" possible still a good story sofar

• Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

  (#) Kitryuu 2006-11-27

  question how is "Tonks was currently seven month pregnant with Rosaline Athena Lupin." "Rosaline currently dating Alex Potter at sixteen" possible still a good story sofar

• Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

  (#) kellypassion 2006-11-27

  I like this story so far.
  But why can't Harry have both Hermione and Luna and what about Lupin's daugtherbut they are cousins so that will not word

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