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It's Nothing
(#) Rous 2006-12-02
First off, I would like to say that this is raw emotion. You can feel it. The wording shows your anger.
Now, this is my opinion, so take it for what it is worth to you. A bit more formatting would enhance this, I think.
"Forget I said anything; just forget it.
It's nothing.
Just ** it, right?
Can't stop...stop thinking.
Let me be alone tonight."
etc.
The formatting now makes it a bit hard to read and garner the emotion behind the words.
Otherwise, this is good. Maybe not Keats, but then, I do not read him (for a reason).
Thank you for sharing.It's Nothing
(#) darks00 2006-12-02
Wow good poem, you put your soul out there, didn't you? Very nicely done, though I'm sorry you had to write it when you were upset. Feeling better now, I hope? Now time to give you a good rating!
xxDarkness' KidxxAuthor's response
Awe thanks :D
Ya I think i did put my soul into it, haha. And ya, I'm feeling better thanks for asking.
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