- Hum, i like it, but i still am wary about the muggleborn come from squibs theory, and i was wondering why nobody is second or fifth in the class order...
Author's responseBecasue they aren't the only good students in class? And they are in many slots, including 2 & 5 in various classes.
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-01Great update, I really liked Harry's conversation with Sev and Peter.
I've got the same problems with columns on this site, mainly because when I try to upload things in HTML format, the apostrophe always comes out as some bizarre character.
Sorry about that, one of my soap boxes.
(#) Lord_Phoenyx 2006-12-01Great Chapter. as for the thing with the journal. if they could fit a basilisk in the toilet pipe, one measly journal doesn't even compare.
Author's responseThe basilisk moves through the draining pipes, not the sewer pipes, and I don't think it could come out of the toilet. If you do, that's fine. I don't.
- Nice continuing chapter. It's interesting to see Harry 'interacting' with Hogwarts on this level. You do a nice job without overdoing it. I like the relationship between Harry and Ellen that you are developing. She needs a bit more in her character. Right now she's a bit thin, but your Summer visistation chapters should give you ample opportunity to flesh her character out.
Looking forward to more~Jim
- Laughs Ah, at least one good guy paid attention to the handbook for TOG (The Other Guy). I think this is going to get very interesting when Riddle finds out that the diary is missing and then realizes that all of his horocruxes are gone. I would not want to be a DE when that happens.
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