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End of the School Year
13 reviewsThe Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the end of term.
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The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Toto 2006-12-01
Hum, i like it, but i still am wary about the muggleborn come from squibs theory, and i was wondering why nobody is second or fifth in the class order...Author's response
Becasue they aren't the only good students in class? And they are in many slots, including 2 & 5 in various classes.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-12-01
I love the way Harry's poking the government to change.
The 3 islands sound interesting. hope theres more on that.
Hmm, early 70's; summer of love (yes I know he's just 12. :-)
Thank you for writing this. Very enjoyable.
Tom A.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) sparky40sw 2006-12-01
love the way Harry Manipulates - no real pressure, just offers opportunities based on careful study of character (and knowledge brought back)
fine work - and a very enjoyable read
thanksThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-01
Great update, I really liked Harry's conversation with Sev and Peter.
I've got the same problems with columns on this site, mainly because when I try to upload things in HTML format, the apostrophe always comes out as some bizarre character.
Sorry about that, one of my soap boxes.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Shaggy37 2006-12-01
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! You brought up a very valid point with your Author Note at the end of the chapter, I agree with you. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)The Younger Potter Twin
(#) DavidMPotter 2006-12-01
An awesome story! I loved the proposal and Ellen's mom's reaction to the marriage comment.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Lord_Phoenyx 2006-12-01
Great Chapter. as for the thing with the journal. if they could fit a basilisk in the toilet pipe, one measly journal doesn't even compare.Author's response
The basilisk moves through the draining pipes, not the sewer pipes, and I don't think it could come out of the toilet. If you do, that's fine. I don't.
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(#) JBern 2006-12-01
Nice continuing chapter. It's interesting to see Harry 'interacting' with Hogwarts on this level. You do a nice job without overdoing it. I like the relationship between Harry and Ellen that you are developing. She needs a bit more in her character. Right now she's a bit thin, but your Summer visistation chapters should give you ample opportunity to flesh her character out.
Looking forward to more~JimThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) Cateagle 2006-12-01
Laughs Ah, at least one good guy paid attention to the handbook for TOG (The Other Guy). I think this is going to get very interesting when Riddle finds out that the diary is missing and then realizes that all of his horocruxes are gone. I would not want to be a DE when that happens.
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