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• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-12-02

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what what happens in the next chapter. I mean its good to see that Harry and Ellen are possibly building a relationship but will it last? I hope so! I like how you brought about introducing all of the different observations about Harry in this chapter without having to force the chapter to fit into the story, this chapter flowed right along with the rest of this story. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Skoell 2006-12-02

  great chapter, but can't rate more good stuff.....
  
  what's with the mars bars? is that some insider gag or a personal craving of the author or is it just a random coincidence?

  Author's response

  It was mentioned in PS that he likes Mars bar. Hence, all the references in fan fics, not just mine.
  
  "T"

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-02

  Very nice update. A bit of progress made with James, and the conversation with Ellen was one of my favorites thus far.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) smargden_2005 2006-12-02

  Just to tell you - I'n reading - and don't like "end of chapter" as it come so sudden. ( to few pages )
  But I like reading your story's
  /Bill

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) kaiserzacc 2006-12-02

  that was a very pioniant and insightful chapter. It is always a little sad to see the people closest to harry really start to see exactly what makes Harry tick. well done.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-12-02

  Another brillant chapter in a wonderful fic. I loved the chat with Mary and Ellen

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) hilarydilarydoc 2006-12-02

  I'm really and truly loving this story. Its well thought out and I love the interaction of Harry with his family, especially James.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) NukularWinter 2006-12-02

  Hi-
  
  I haven't reviewed this yet, but wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying this immensely.
  
  Considering that the genre of "Harry time travels to the MWPP era" is hardly an new territory, you've done a really nice job here.
  
  (Here's my constructive review, please take it in the spirit in which it was intended). Looking at your body of work as a whole, I think that I best enjoy your stories where Harry isn't explicitly paired with either Hermione or Luna ("Scenes From October" is probably my fave, I also really enjoyed "Six Virgins")... not that I don't enjoy the other stories, but I've noticed that when you pair Harry with Hermione or Luna you fall into some familiar patterns and skip a lot of the development of the relationship.
  
  In this case you've created all of the relationships from scratch and I think the story is better for it.
  
  Anyway, hopefully this is helpful; if not, I was drinking when I wrote this :)
  
  -Sean

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) JVTazz 2006-12-02

  setting future scenes perhaps, good show :)

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-07-15

  Outstanding chapter in so many ways. Nice writing.
  
  gunny

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