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Summer Visits
13 reviewsThe Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, more visits, and we learn how nasty Petunia really is.
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The Younger Potter Twin
(#) amsk5 2006-12-03
I am enjoying this story as I have with virtualy all the others that you have written - finally thought I should give a review - your stories have interesting tweeks like this one going into the body of a relative that has died - I slightly dislike the fact that it is an alternative universe and thus no help to his true friends / relatives but did like the raised point that if it was it could remove the lives of his surviving friends kids. It might have been interesting if he had ended up in his aunt's life and you could have tried to leave in unsure for a bit to tease the ready too.
On th whole a great read - unfortunately with Harry keeping all his memories and power it is a little too easy for him to overcome his nemasis but I still look forward to more.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) brad 2006-12-05
"She had her suspicions about Harry's feelings towards young Ellen" ... yeah, same here!
So, if you're going to preserve James/Lily ... this means that Harry/Henry is likely to be around to see Harry James Potter born and grow up? Interesting. Actually it would be nice to see how he'd interact with both 'himself' and also a young Hermione and Luna. If you're not going to go down the route you took with Hermione and that Old Believer - 'Edward'? - and have a cross-generations romance, which looks unlikely with Ellen being written here as a very nice (and blossoming!) potential match for Harry.
I love the Wizgamamot proposal and the idea of a forced referendum!
"When they solved the problem of inter-mixing the ward potions together in 1975, their income was assured" - nice. Good vibes to see Harry doing his good-guy thing.
"That's about it". Hmmmph. Living longer is pretty much everything you'd want, isn't it? I'd be bloody happy if I was magical and could have double or triple my normal life span.
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