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Can love withstand all obstacles? - A Fiyeraba Love Story...book based mostly.
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Wishing Only Wounds the Heart
(#) kerjen 2007-05-18
For Chapter 1 -- Good beginning! Shows a nice understanding of the characters and their friendship.
If I could make one suggestion? It might just be the way the file loaded, but each line is a separate paragraph and they don't need to be. Some of them should be grouped together.
I'm eager to read more!
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