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Endings and Beginnings2 reviews
Kind of a filler!
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-04The sound of grasshoppers and birds chirping made the perfect soundtrack for their goodbye. The stars in the sky, the perfect back drop. i eat this kind of stuff up. i love it. i don't seem like i'm a romantic, but i seriously fiend for that kind of writing. thank you for satisfying my hunger. :) ...wait. that sounded dirty. oh well.
i was suprised at pete not accepting her offer to come in. is he being a gentleman? or is there something deeper to that?
"I want to keep you happy...I love your smile." how perfect.
i hate the term "filler". i think for the above mentioned, this "ain't" a filler.
Author's responseI'm glad you liked it! I'm a sap and that was just fluff. LoL. Um...Pete and Arissa are both different right now compared to how I made them sound in the first couple chapters. The change to that is going to be gradual. Pete is sort of funny and sweet. Arissa is sort of brave but still really shy. They are both a little unsure of themselves and I want that to change by them being together. Pete will eventually get a little more sarcastic and Arissa will get a little more sexy like the first chapter. As for the term "filler" I was just disappointed that I couldn't get it right. Thanks for the review!
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-05I've never felt so romantic on a Tuesday morning in my life....
This was in NO WAY A filler, as Crystal and I have discussed before, it's a fulFILLment....
I'm so glad there's another chapter! goes to read!!
Author's responseI'm glad I supplied you with a different feeling on one of those "same old same old" days!
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