(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-05The end line of your chapters are always so amazing
It was going to be a good night and if he played his cards right a great life. Amen to that.
I'm totally curious, first there's Arissa in chapter 1&2 and now this Arissa.....ponders This is making way for a very interesting story.
I cannot wait to read more.
Author's responseI think ending sentences are suppose to make you want to never stop reading! I love coming up with the end of a chappie! Glad you all didn't think they were "Fillers".
- Love, love, love it.
I am finding it hard to match this Arrissa with the one in the first chapters, but I know you're going to give me a superb story to explain it. And for that, I cannot wait!
Author's responseThanks for not putting any pressure on me! LoL. :) If you read carefully Arissa is a lot like I first protrayed her. Little things she says and does are the same character as the first 2 chapters. Pay attention and there is a connection. It is just subtle. As the story continues she will become more and more brave. Glad you love it!
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-05i like emeralds character, i'm hoping and thinking she plays a bigger part than just the "typical" best friend in this story. maybe that's my over-active imagination at work. i dunno.
i love how she gets nervous. honeymoon phase gitters. it's fantastic.
Author's responseIt is so not your over-active imagination. You so know me! Emeralds character does take a little bit of a bigger part in the story! Keep reading and you might be surprised. I've got it planned out in my head, but it all isn't written yet. I wanted Arissa to be a girl...not just a temptress. Thats why her character is shy and nervous at times. But notice her sometimes aggressive side.
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