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• Loves Punishment

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-12-05

  The end line of your chapters are always so amazing
  It was going to be a good night and if he played his cards right a great life. Amen to that.
  
  I'm totally curious, first there's Arissa in chapter 1&2 and now this Arissa.....ponders This is making way for a very interesting story.
  
  I cannot wait to read more.

  Author's response

  I think ending sentences are suppose to make you want to never stop reading! I love coming up with the end of a chappie! Glad you all didn't think they were "Fillers".

• Loves Punishment

  (#) riaryder 2006-12-05

  Love, love, love it.
  I am finding it hard to match this Arrissa with the one in the first chapters, but I know you're going to give me a superb story to explain it. And for that, I cannot wait!

  Author's response

  Thanks for not putting any pressure on me! LoL. :) If you read carefully Arissa is a lot like I first protrayed her. Little things she says and does are the same character as the first 2 chapters. Pay attention and there is a connection. It is just subtle. As the story continues she will become more and more brave. Glad you love it!

• Loves Punishment

  (#) xloveorsympathy 2006-12-05

  oh wow. i lurve it i lurve it i lurve it! this is amazing, you've got me hooked! keep up the awesome work!! cant wait fot eh next update :)
  
  rawr__xloveorsympathy

  Author's response

  Glad you like it!

• Loves Punishment

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-05

  i like emeralds character, i'm hoping and thinking she plays a bigger part than just the "typical" best friend in this story. maybe that's my over-active imagination at work. i dunno.
  
  i love how she gets nervous. honeymoon phase gitters. it's fantastic.

  Author's response

  It is so not your over-active imagination. You so know me! Emeralds character does take a little bit of a bigger part in the story! Keep reading and you might be surprised. I've got it planned out in my head, but it all isn't written yet. I wanted Arissa to be a girl...not just a temptress. Thats why her character is shy and nervous at times. But notice her sometimes aggressive side.

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