(#) FallOutGrl 2006-12-18gasp no! that sux so much! :( im sure it'll get better tho right?
btw Ryan should go out with me- i mean a girl.....named chelsea in your story:D that would be so kicky and would totally make my day brighter:D
love the sotry hunn! update soon!
Author's responseHmmm...Ryan and Chelsea you say? Could be a possibility... ;)
(#) Lillith_Thursday 2006-12-26It was all happy and then BOOM! Stabs her in the heart. The kiss meant nothing to him? Ugh. Guys are so mean... Okay so I know this is just a story and it needs to go somewhere but I want to smack Brendon in the face right about now. She has no reason to be mad at the blonde girl. It was Brendon that didn't tell her about the other girl. I just hate that crushed feeling. It's happened to me except it I was offically dating this one guy. Anyway, I'm rambling and need to stop. Great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Much love as always
(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2006-12-30Just to pose a side. How about add a little bit of WTF. Say Brendon only hooked up after the fair. That the girl's completely new. That maybe he's just playing mind games. Or better yet that Ryan [seeing as he is kinda with the hots for Raquel...or so it seems with his La-la self] makes a move directly after the encounter with Brendon and Kelsey. I mean, there are ways to work it out. I mean, say Brendon just wanted someone who could come with him on tour? I mean that's a possibly.
Author's responseOoh! Interesting. I so love your ideas. Maybe I could work them in somehow. I dunno. I always look forward to your input.
- I am really enjoyin this story, and i was kinda sad when i read the last bit, but im more excited about readin what happens next! lol, so i look 4ward 2 readin the next chapter, so im just wonderin if ur gona post it soon. cos its been a while, and i luv brendon urie!
Author's responseTrying to post as soon as I can. I want the next chapter to be really good since the last one was kinda crappy. :/
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