- OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! You really are BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. This story rules. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
Author's responseThanks. I had a good deal of help with the chapter from those listed in the acknowledgements.~Jim
- Oh Mah Gawsh. Excellently done. Truly. This was AWESOME. I have to say - "Let me show you how to clear your mind" and what happened when he said it has to be one of the greatest lines in fanfiction - ever.
Author's responseAnd here I was hoping you would pick Hack's ending lines in Chapter 13 of Bungle. Glad you liked it.~Jim
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-12-14The duel didn't disappoint in the least. Snape was impressive and Harry was exhausted, but it all worked out in a manner that I can easily accept as realistic.
Susan's conversation with Hannah was pretty well done as well. If Harry can forgive Ginny (to an extent), then I suppose Susan can forgive Hannah (also to an extent).
I'm not sure why, but I want to see Bill and Harry have a conversation in the next chapter, and I'd also like to see Peter Abbott make an appearance. Ah...if only Harry had managed to get him to agree to a duel.
Author's responseI wanted Snape to be a worthy opponent. I hoped Susan and Hannah came off as believeable. Bill and Harry will probably have some kind of conversation, though you have to wonder how much talking Harry is capable of right now.~Jim
(#) JustAReader 2006-12-15I just found this story yesterday, it's great! You have done a wonderful job developing the charecters making them seem real and believable. I also enjoy some of your unique views of the potterverse. please continue to write more.
Author's responseThanks. I am starting on ch 29 today.~Jim
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