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This Curse on Your Lips
(#) GwenMerlon 2006-12-14
Okay, I kind-of love this story, you you need to write more fast! I loved the shot bit. ;)Author's response
hehe i pretty much love that part! haha tis amazing!!
thanks for the review!This Curse on Your Lips
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-16
FG to the review section, please! FG to the review section!...
GET YOUR LAZY ASS TO THE REVIEW SECTION, FROSTEDGLASS!!!
Hello. Here I am...
"Zacky-Poo" -> Ha ha. ;)
I love how Pete gives Zacky-Poo a piece of his mind over the phone. I never liked Pete Wentz more. :)
Pete pretending to have helped cleaning up the apartment. -> HA HA. Plonkily, dunkely, neighbor.
I love the fact that they played Monopoly. I had them play that boardgame in one of my stories as well because I love it so much.
I laughed out loud about Kade asking Pete if he hitched a tent when she did that shot. I like boys in awkward situations. Especially when they're sexual...
Just keep on producing funny fic like this chapter and I'll keep on reviewing.
Take a goddamn rating point, you show-off... ;)Author's response
hehe. i had to make pete a little cocky. haha. I love monopoly! hehe I was laughing while i was typing the part about pitching a tent! my dad just stared at me like I was crazy! haha point taken! haha.This Curse on Your Lips
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2006-12-16
haha class story lovin it so far so plz update!Author's response
haha yay!
will do. prolly monday night.
im really busy this weekend.
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