- Aww, poor Riku. I feel so sorry that he's left with not knowing how Sora feels about him. I hope that he felt better afterwards!
Ah, wow this seems kind of late. This poem was written so long ago.
Anyways, You did a lovely job with this, and I loved the rhythm throughout the poem. You were able to make me feel as sad and confused as he sounded!
Good job, and Kudos to you.
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