Atlanta gets hurt because of Ellanna (she doesn't seriously injured). But Ellanna getting Atlanta hurt, just makes Archie hate her more. And, it seems that Atlanta hates Neil even more.
awwww thats so great! you keep on putting things in brackets and it sounds like yur unsure of what yur writing. (if i'm wrong my apologies) but hey! yur a GREAT authour! don't worry! its sounds great!
ya. I noticed that. Sorry.
aw dunt be sorry, i'm just saying give a shot at what yur writing and by the way it sounds wicked cool!
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