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The masquerade nightclub
4 reviewsthis is totally out of the Full Metal world and kinda in between ours and theres. Riza dances the night a way with a masked man and her superior finds out... what will happen?
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The masquerade nightclub
(#) FlameAlchemist 2006-12-19
this is such an awesome story very well written please continue it!
flame out
-FlameAlchemistAuthor's response
Actually, this fanfic was originally a lot longer than it is now but it involved some things that i didn't want my friends who read my stuff off of my laptop to see cuz then the would know the things that go on in my head sometimes... If you really want me to continue this one i could use some more help with the plot line and other things... i need some more inspiration.The masquerade nightclub
(#) FlameAlchemist 2006-12-22
hey its me again, that'd be awesome if you could continue the story, I have written two stories with Edward and Winry, and Roy and Riza. The first is called
Loving...waiting...Edward
and the second is still being written but most chapters are finished is called
.A.Crimson.Darkness.
please enjoy and i can give a few ideas if i really think about it!
Flame out
-FlameAlchemistAuthor's response
that would be lovely. i would greatly appreciate it. And i have read some of your works i just can't remember which ones at the moment.
This one seems really popular except the fact that your the only one who reviewed it.The masquerade nightclub
(#) timberwolf17 2007-01-08
Icey cool!Author's response
Thanks! Anything you think I could do better on? I live off criticism.
And does the abbreviation LCHS mean anything to you?The masquerade nightclub
(#) jennlyn78 2007-02-02
Good short story ... very entertainingAuthor's response
Thank you!
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