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The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-20
Friggin awesome.
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Patrick - be scared of Matthew, I don't like one bit.....The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2006-12-20
I love this story, but maybe make it happier..? Anyway awesome! Update soon!Author's response
The entire next chapter is completely happy! Enjoy!The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-21
Oh, hello, Dr. Heinrich. Do you speak any German?
I had a Heinrich kid in my English class once (first name though). In the same class that Sheena (the little girl I stole the name from) was in. ;) Yeah, I know EVERYBODY is interested in my ramblings…
“Adlerian technique” -> research or plain common knowledge? Anyways, I love it when writers’ prove they actually know something about what they’re writing. (Even though, that’s pretty tough competition for me then… ;) )
I love the whole Wendy’s-past/ party paragraph. Thanks for giving us more insight into the characters and your marvelous (one or two l, Katy? I forget.) way with words.
Hm… mumbles something incoherently Sorry… just had to pick up my jaw there…
WHOA. (I know, you are in awe of my fine mastery of the English language. Me too, actually.) I am deeply impressed. That’s some interesting plot twist. I am so much into this story! So much that I just can’t help but use bold lettering.
The phone conversation with Patrick was completely believable and authentic.
I love this story. It’s art.
Take a rating point. (Stupid me wanted to hit “insightful” but accidentally chose “moving”. But I guess that’s kinda related so no harm done. ;) )
Update soon. I’m addicted.Author's response
One of my majors is psychology, so I've had to learn the techniques, thus the common knowledge of the Adlerian way... Dr. Heinrich is actually my psych teacher and since psychology origionated in Germany, I felt it would be good to have a German name...The Mistake
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-21
ooh!
someone's jealous!
that flashback from 3 years ago was scary! geez! haha.
keep that updates coming!
there amazing!The Mistake
(#) CoraLiz 2007-01-16
I really love the paragraph where Ava is talking to the psychologist. It seemed uber authentic if you ask me. I could almost hear the words being spoken as I read them.Author's response
Maybe that's because you listened me read it before you read it to yourself...The Mistake
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01
I still don't trust Matthew, I love Patrick jealous, and I really really really don't like the psychiatrist.
I think it's because he's Matthew's shrink, which is a bit convenient, no?
Oooooh I love this story like I love macaroni and cheeses. The Kraft kind. With the gooey cheese in the silver pouch, not the powdery cheese. That's how much I love this.
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