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What happens when Cronus kidnaps Theresa and Jay must rescue her by getting the golden fleece. This time without Medea's help or Hera's.
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Jay and the Golden Fleece
(#) KillerCrocBabe 2006-12-30
WOOT that was good. Havent hered of mrs-jay much. She didnt even bother to reveiw fingeckos leaving list. But back to the storie. THAT ROCKED!!!!!!!!!Jay and the Golden Fleece
(#) horseluvinfreak 2007-01-13
my god, this is a brilliant story! C'est magnifique!! Keep up the good work!Jay and the Golden Fleece
(#) Magic144 2007-03-06
K, I have an idea, but you don't have to use it, just consider it. I don't know whats gonna happen next, but you're story is perfect for a personification. (It's when a writer makes a non-living thing have human actions.) Just because I think it would add more visuals in you're writting. For ex. if the waves get higher you could write: 'As the waves became more and more rebellious, the ship moaned in annoyance.' Something like that( sorry thought about that at the top of my head.) Anyways great story, and I hope you consider my idea (you don't have to use the ex.) It's just so that the reader can visualize a certain thing/event in the plot more clearly.
Luv the story:Magic144:D
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