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• Shadow World

  (#) jabarber69 2006-12-23

  Hey probably more realistic than anything else out there. How do you beat a dark evil wizard that has 50 + years of casting magic, dark magic at that with no training or training that has mostly been a joke, and the wierdest or probably the stupidest part was dumbydork thinking Harry Potter was going to win the final battle with nothing more than his feelings of love for his fellow man! Yeah Right!

  Author's response

  That's exactly what I've been thinking for awhile now, one of the reasons I'm looking forward to the next book, if Harry beats Voldemort in it than who missed with their tripping hex? ;)

• Shadow World

  (#) drakenhoff 2007-01-03

  This is actually really good, its unexpectedly sad at the end when emotion comes through the otherwise clipped dialogue. But my personal favourite part of it was Voldemort's shock at having killed him so easily. I can imagine his expression so clearly.

  Author's response

  I wrote it clipped for a few reasons, one I'm lazy and two because when in a rush, as Luna was supposed to be in, one doesn't usually pull all thoughts to their fullest.

• Shadow World

  (#) silvershadowwolf24 2007-05-15

  Hey anime,
  This is a mad story! Alanna got me into this site. You keep giving us good sites to go on.
  ~ silvershadowwolf24

  Author's response

  Thank you very much, and if I run into more good HP sites than I'll tell Al or you. :)

• Shadow World

  (#) DarkPheonix 2011-03-24

  I can totally see "The Final Battle" as having gone down that way. I mean really, there's no way in hell short of a once-in-a-million-lifetimes fluke that an untrained kid would be able to overcome odds like that. But alas, authors usually don't like sad endings =P
  By the way, I really don't get how it's related to Kingdom Hearts, aside from the summary =/

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