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Checking Up
3 reviewsOlder brothers have to look out for their younger brothers, right? (Ayame and Hatori, mild yaoi mentioned, speculative after-series)
4Funny
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Checking Up
(#) Ariel_Tempest 2005-08-09
Mmmmmmm, two of my favorite pairings, and a wonderfully animate (sick) Aya. Is there anything in the world more smile worthy?
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Of course, I want to hug Hari and tell him it'll all be okay, but that's old hat.Checking Up
(#) strayphantom 2005-10-28
Now when has Aya EVER tried to subvert the younger generation? Hatori is far too suspicious... >_>
This amused me greatly, and I loved your characterisation of Ayame! It was spot on! I see Hatori has softened somewhat since we first met him, and Aya seems quiter (still fun, though!)
Great job!
Author\'s Response: Oh yes, Aya is the VERY PICTURE of virtue and good breeding. ^__^ I'm glad you liked it. I try to keep folks IC at all costs.Checking Up
(#) Lahmia_Darkmaiden 2006-03-27
I was having a really crappy day and thought I'd come online to read some fanfics, see if they'd cheer me up. And what do you know, I read your fic and it just made me laugh and giggle so much that I'm feeling very positive and happy now. So, thank you very much for writing this, I loved your perverted Ayame, he's my favourite character of all Furuba. :)
Author\'s Response: ^___^ Glad I could make your day happier! Thanks!
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