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The First Day Of Christmas
6 reviewsThe 12 days of Christmas begin on 25th December and finish on 5th January. Enjoy an original but moving account of Ella's 12 days of Christmas
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The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-25
Just from the title and the summary I could tell that this is a brilliant concept, Britain. I’m guessing we’ll be blessed with a new chapter each day. (Which means this story will be over on my birthday. How subtle of me.) OH, JOY! :)
Crisp, white, fluffy particles of snow that had brought misery to the traffic in the city but pure delight to the children and children like adults everywhere. -> Neato.
“disaproving of his sheer adorableness” -> Do you actually know what you’re talking about? :P
I love how you give the dates of the life of Ella’s mother on the tombstone and then a flashback to the day she died.
I want the next day to come quickly too so I can read more of this goodness!
This calls for some plonk… be careful when you drink it, I placed a rating point at the bottom of the glass.
Love ya much!Author's response
thank you for warning about the rating point, nearly gagged on it! I miss you.... :(The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) duckapple 2006-12-25
Purely amazing.
Let's adopt a kitten.Author's response
how about a walrus? I'll buy it, the pound is very good against the dollar at the moment....The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) LOVELA 2006-12-25
UGH! You always know how to get me hooked on your stories so quickly! I'm pretty sure this is secretly why you are the pres. of the DoJ...right?
Absolutely Fabulous Darling! Raises wine (plonk) glassAuthor's response
It's no secret - I AM THE PRESIDENT.The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-25
There are no amount of words to describe how amazing this one shot was. So how about I give you a rating point and leave it at that? Merry Christmas, love.Author's response
takes rating point and shoves it down swelling breastsThe Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-25
This is a one shot, isn't it? My God it's not...don't I feel dumb...oh well, nothing new.Author's response
I love you so much more.The Twelve Days Of Christmas
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-01
you really know how to make my eyes smile. that is so cheesy that i can hardly believe i just wrote it. but i did. ha. you can make fun of me now.
anyway, after a week long hiatus, i must say i could never have expected you to come up with 7 chapters of pure bliss in such little time. i guess i underestimated your greatness. i've already printed out all 7 chapters and read them at my apartment last night (what a way to ring in the new year, let me tell you) but i still want to leave a little review for every chapter. so, in list form (because i'm sure you miss it):
-/Crisp, white, fluffy particles of snow that had brought misery to the traffic in the city but pure delight to the children and children like adults everywhere./ - i'm in love with the ambiance.
-/Christmas was the time to evidence your kindness, to present sacrifices of your love in monetary and sentimental value, to allow the festive spirit in and push the negativities out through the advent door./ very well written, and i love the way that reads. i dunno.
-i love how you give us just enough in this first chapter. it's pretty much addicting. and i love it.
i miss you, but your writing comes in a close second.
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