(#) rawrlittledino 2006-12-28So far, so good. I'm excited so far, considering its not going to be a story about loving the moody emo child. Ha.
Keep going da'ling. =]
Author's responselol. the "moody emo child". child being the key word in that statement. Yea Molly and Pete are going to have a long road ahead of them when they finally meet, but love with definitly not be an emotion that either feels for the other one.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-28The opening letter is so powerful, it’s uncanny. Love the musing on the number (and word) “seven”. I am more than excited to learn what happened. Good job.
This is SO worth continuing. Make chicken salad every day if it helps your plot development but don’t you stop!
Looks like you have a fairly big cast (all of her family). But maybe that’s just in the beginning to set the mood and all. Probably. Big character casts are always scary to me (as a writer) but I guess I’m still going to try working with it in the Curls. Yes, I can ramble too. ;)
I love this. It’s on my alerts and favorites already.
Author's responseyea the family isn't going to play a huge roll over the entire story, but they will be significant during certain parts.
Molly's parents relationship esspecially. but that's all your getting for right now. bwahahaha.
and yay! I made a favorites list and an alert list. sweet.
- So, I don't know if you still get notifications from this; but I recently started working on my old stories and decided to see if new stuff existed. So I googled FOB fan fiction and I enventually found this story posted on another site and I was reminded how much I loved it. I then decided I needed to reread it. And this lead to me discovering I was a horrible reader who only reivewed sparingly. So this is me making up for it...7 years later. Which I know realize is ironic seeing the opening. I'll shut up now.
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