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• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) LOVELA 2006-12-28

  Insecurity Sex! HA HA HA! I love it. This story is so so so touching. You are ruling more than you know, or do you?
  
  I know I said I quit, but you secretly know I could never do that. I'm addicted to you all like I am addicted to coffee. VERY SCARY!
  
  Smooches.

  Author's response

  wow, you're way faithful. Thanks for always reviewing. Damn I can't even get out sincerity here. What the hell - THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) riaryder 2006-12-28

  Holy shit, lady!
  How the hell do you manage so many AMAZING stories at once?
  I don't even know where to start, here. Funny, moving, original, ambiance. How do I pick one to give you a rating point? Abso-fucking-lutley wonderful. You rule. Official. Loving every last word. Yes, I gush, but you deserve it.xx

  Author's response

  See you lassy - you're a wee tart but I love ye! Now, how 'bout some IrnBru and a Wham Bar eh??

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-28

  /"Do you have a life?" she muttered, unzipping the case.
  "Sorry?" He asked.
  "I said, how's your wife?" She smiled at him./ -> I’m a sucker for crap like that. :) And you.
  
  I totally plonk it that she used to date Joe!
  
  I really like Patrick’s job. privateAlexhuggage
  
  Overly cute message Ella leaves on his answering machine. But you don’t need me to tell you that.
  
  Andy is the perfect waiter. ;)
  
  /"Who are we going to see again?" Patrick asked nonchalantly.
  "You're memory is shot man, Fall Out Boy!" he said.
  "Right - Fall Out Boy....They better be alright...." He said.
  "Are you kidding?? They're crap! But I have to support Andy - it's his first band...."/ -> HA HA HA! I LIEBE IT!!!
  
  God, the ending of this chapter kills me. It’s soooo good. I like it when people (preferably girls) put some make-up on for themselves. Even when they’re just alone.
  
  So despite of the serious stuff in here, I had to rate it funny. Because I enjoyed the funny bits so much.
  
  I can see how punk came about in Brishland.

  Author's response

  See, Alex, this is why you're wonderful. End of.

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) rawrlittledino 2006-12-28

  I really like this storyy.
  Really ambiance-ick.
  Ha. And you manage to put funny, sad, hot and nice-cosy all into one. I wish I could do that.
  Loves. x
  Izzy

  Author's response

  You do write like that - you just don't see it! We're always our worst critics. x

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) xxlaurenxx 2006-12-28

  "When I squeezed every last penny outta him, then we'll Bonnie and Clyde it sweety - just have patience...."
  
  haha i love this story so much its unreal. your an amazing writer, the story is new and exciting, unlike all the cliches you see on this site. you make reading this story something that i look foreward to doing and i thank you for that :D

  Author's response

  OK, seriously, I'm crap at taking compliments. So I'm just gonna say Thanks. ok..

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) MMMramen 2006-12-28

  Katy, my love, you are incredible. Who else can make me stay up past my bedtime to read her story?
  
  "Play Ella..." he whispered in her ear. She pushed on her bottom lip hard and concentrated hard as his subtle strength both physically and emotionally helped her move the bow to the strings. –Yes, I know it's from the last chapter, but that imagery struck me as really beautiful and I wanted you to know that.
  
  Ella and Joe had been dating for 4 months, she found him utterly charming and was overwhelmed with his attention to her. –Whoa, whoa, WHOA! What? I...well then...hmmm. Oh well.
  
  /"Who are we going to see again?" Patrick asked nonchalantly.
  
  "You're memory is shot man, Fall Out Boy!" he said.
  
  "Right - Fall Out Boy....They better be alright...." He said.
  
  "Are you kidding?? They're crap! But I have to support Andy - it's his first band...." / –Soooo, they’re not in the band? I think I’m confused, but when am I not confused?
  
  This story is just soooo...I can't think of a word, but my heart swells with pride. I miss our dumb conversations on AIM. Hope all is well, lovey.

  Author's response

  I think all my girls have forotten how to log on to AIM, so here's instructions: LOG IN DAMNIT!!!!
  
  Seriously, I'm missing you all it's so stupid.

• The Twelve Days Of Christmas

  (#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-01

  okay. it won't let me give you a rating point...again. the first time this was cute. now it's just making me feel like a jackass.
  
  so i guess i have to give you a meaningless rating point, because it's not actually going to count, but i wanted to rate this as "original" for a couple of reasons.
  
  1.) ella dating joe and no serious "typical" drama coming from it. yea, the situation is maybe a little awkward, but it's okay. i think that's realistic, and i like it.
  
  2.) ha, it's just Andy in fall out boy. that makes me laugh a little, but it's never been done before. i love it.
  
  3.) the basic plot line and the way you parallel the chapters and times, it makes me swoon.
  
  i miss you. just incase i haven't already addressed that numerous times...

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