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Independence Day
(#) Alorkin 2006-12-30
You've been reading kinsfire, haven't you? Hermione is bound and determined to have Harry(YES! does Snoopy dance) and is using her rather impressive intellect to get what she wants.
Doctors Granger seem more accepting of Harry, and of their developing relationship, than most. Both realize their daughter will soon become intimate with her chosen, and are planning for it.
There are only two things I can point out, that you might want to re-check.
1)Five Galleons is a huge amount to pay for a taxi ride, given that Harry paid seven for his wand, the single most important item in a wizard's possession, and given that the knight bus only costs eleven sickles, (unless one wants chocolate and/or a toothbrush)
2) It takes a bit longer than two days at short rations, for the stomach to react to food the way as you've painted. Starvation for two or more weeks, or bare-minimal food for several weeks, will produce the effect you want.
As before, I eagerly await the next page of 'Independence Day'. AlorkinIndependence Day
(#) Alatoic01 2006-12-30
Nice chapter, I like that the Grangers will be helping Harry, I am sure that even if they dont know all the laws od the wizard world they have experience in the muggle world, specially if they are half as smart as Hermione.
By the way love the way she is seducing Harry, I really like how she is taking charge or the relationship(I can belive it because she is more mature and Harry is to naive and emotional handicaped for the life with the Dursleys), I can't wait to see what else she is going to do and how much she will advance the seduction.
I really hope you update soon and lets us know what else have Dumbledore interfere and with whom are the Weasleys.
MACIndependence Day
(#) Dragen 2007-01-02
What another great chapter, I'm happy that Jill and Roger believed Harry, and willing to help.
I can't wait for someone to kick the asses of the Dursleys.Independence Day
(#) Skoell 2007-01-06
like the flirting! especially the way you write your characters...hermione flashed her knickers...and harry gets an inkling that she might like him...
d'oh! =PIndependence Day
(#) merle_c 2008-06-29
A fun little chapter. Hermione seems to be pretty aggressive, which I think suits her and her normal approach to things. Her parents seem to be pretty accepting of a possible relationship.
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