"You never told me you were such a slut, Veronica Mars."
It's good. :D A little bit too angsty in places, but for the most part you pulled of misery without being overdramatic. So yeah, good. thumbsup
Terse and stressful. Lilly was perfectly in-character. Great job!
I sort of half-expected something like this to happen in S1, actually. Great writing and interaction, in-character, tense, and properly angsty. Congratulations, you did a good job.
Ir eally liked this way to take things. Lily was more in character than I've ever written her myself. Well done and I hope to read more of your stuff in the future
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