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11. Just Like Jon Bon Jovi Did
4 reviewsin which Patrick kidnaps Molly and Jamie for pizza and practice. In which hell freezes over while Molly watches band practice--you'll see.
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-04
"Hey you. So, Jamie and I just had a very interesting chat about the Road Runner." -> Geek. Yumm-EY!
/"Finally I'm taller then someone." Patrick grinned down at the little boy, "Put'er there kiddo." He added sticking his palm out for a high five. While Jamie just looked at him funny before turning to his sister and saying,
"I think I take back what I said about him being cool."/ -> And this is mainly why I rated the chapter “funny”. This and all the other hilarious stuff.
Ha, Joe is the shit too. :)
Molly settled Jamie down with crayons, coloring books, and action figures that Pete just so happened to have lying around the house. 'I'm not going to ask. and strangly am not surprised in the slightest' Molly thought to herself -> Yeah… I just watched a three-part fuse interview that was partly set at Pete’s parents’s house. Definitely, yeah.Author's response
lol yup. Patrick is a total geek. Boys+Cartoons and all that.
I had such a hard time writing Jamie, I feel like he came across as a small teenager. lol.
Joe is the shit. I figure if I'm married to him in your story then I should probably make him cool. ha.
Yes. Peter with the Peter Pan complex. nuff said.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-04
Damn, this story is awesome. I just started reading it. Oh some parts made me chuckle.. like the high five thing with patrick and joe. Anyway update this story soon so I can have my daily dose of fanfic.Author's response
lol. thanks for the kind words. I'm glad I could make you chuckle. I'm working on the next couple of chapters tonight 'cause I'm kind of in a groove.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-01-04
Oh yes.
Babies will be made.Author's response
tee-hee. yay babies!
I just put another chapter up. you might not be feeling as lovey dovey towards me after this one though. ...eep.
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