- I still want to have your babies.
Maybe even more so now.
And my vote goes to either Patrick or Pete.
Author's responsewell so far that's one positive reaction to the hardest chapter I've had to write so far. and since this was the hardest so far I dunno if I'm looking forward to the next..50 or so. lol.
yay we're still having babies. how many?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-05Liked how you described Molly’s intonation. If there’s one thing that TV has over literature it’s the sound. Thing is, if you don’t point out that somebody is being sarcastic some people won’t get it (especially if you just introduce the character) and if you do point it out it’s not very subtle and usually sarcasm is supposed to be just that. It’s a dilemma. Blah-di-blah.
What a couple of jackass parents. sighs frustratedly
Yup, the question is who is she talking to? The same person that Sheena was talking to in my last update for all I know… ;) (I really have no idea. I am tempted to guess Pete but yeah… maybe that’s just to tease yous. ;) )
Nice chapter. The excitement causes me to gobble down my lunch even faster than normally.
Author's responsefirst off-damn you for reviewing just as I was going backto sleep. lol.
yup, I'm big on descriptive terminology when I'm writing 'cause I always get frusrated when I'm reading and I have to figure out wtf the character is trying to get across.
Plus when you're writing scripts actors tend to want to shoot you if you don't give them "direction".
yea they are jackass's. that's the point. I think I went a little over the top though.
As to whom Molly was talking to its Patrick. I was litterally trying to sleep and Patrick was tap dancing in my head going "I'm mad at her. lemme yell damnit!" so I set him loose. Mean for trying to tease me with mentioning Pete btw, just mean! lol.
don't gobble too fast darling. choking is hazzerdous to your health.
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