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The Sixth Day
(#) Kettles 2007-01-06
O.o
this was so....wow. i had no idea what was going on in a way, but that was great cuz then i felt like i was losing touch with reality.
so heartbreaking....The Sixth Day
(#) Greater_Basilisk 2007-01-31
You write well, short and to the point. You might want to break up the first sentence; it's somewhat run-on. I'm just left wondering why Mishka goes crazy at all, other than because his lover said he would.
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