A silly little one-shot, the first HP story I wrote, written befor HBP
genius! deffinitly worth reading.
Short, simple, very funny and sweet.
(#) RekoM 2007-01-14
I LOVE the plot line. There were a few grammar mistakes. But otherwise it was really good! Maybe consider getting an extra beta-reader? it might be helpful! keep up the great work! i look forward to reading more of your stories!
Loved the ending. Now, instead of 'Kentucky Fried Chicken' you can serve 'Kentucky Fried Deatheater'?
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