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• Infidelity

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-01-08

  I will be honest, I don't like the use of real girlfriend's names in the fiction but I'll allow you to do it because I like where this is going.
  
  Please don't be mad at me, you'll get used to how we work here at FicWad, lol.
  
  Benson and Hedges is bad bad bad. Are You british??

  Author's response

  Hehe not mad at you at all, I don't know why I did it, I don't like it either, it just popped up while I was writing and didnt realise it myself till later.
  
  Yeh Benson and Hedges, not healthy at all... nope not Britsih..I'm Australian my brother was born in England though...oh and thanks for the ratings and reviews :D

• Infidelity

  (#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-08

  I love it so far. Patrick the heartbreaker..you don't read that everyday. aha!

• Infidelity

  (#) MMMramen 2007-01-08

  Benson and Hedges? Love, those are old lady cigarettes. Well, in my extensive experience as a convenience store cashier, decrepit old woman ask for Benson and Hedges Menthols. Those and Misty Menthol Lights. But that's beside the point. The point is, I'm kind of digging this story. It has a ton of potential. And unlike Katy, I think it's just fine to use real names of girlfriends...mostly because I use them in my story. So, enjoy your rating point. He loves to cuddle.

  Author's response

  Nt really into menthols, unless I had class and didnt want my breath to smell like nicotene. I used to go for Winfield blues, then Malborough reds, Bensons seemed to be the next choice I guess.
  
  Thanks for digging my story, and I will enjoy my rating point,I like to cuddle to..maybe we'll have our own affair!!

• Infidelity

  (#) riaryder 2007-01-08

  Mmm, intrigued by this story.
  Update soon, I like where you're going here.

• Infidelity

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-01-09

  /"Starlight Star bright
  First Star I see tonight.
  I wish I may I wish I might
  Kill the Bitch that kissed my knight."/
  
  i love you for updating and that up there is my new motto for life.
  :)
  xxxxo

  Author's response

  hehe thanks

• Infidelity

  (#) LOVELA 2007-01-09

  I am very interested to see where this story is going. It's not often where Patrick isn't protrayed as a cute, adoreable, 'nice guy' type. Does that make sense? I'm still hopped up on the Nyquil.
  
  I likes, totally.

  Author's response

  yeh makes total sense, which is somewhat the reason why I had portrayed him this way...although I must say that I am a bit nervous about treading outside that safty net...

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